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Old 04-10-11   #11
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Default Re: Tarot Reading (my first project story)

I'm glad that you like my story. Any request or do you want me to continue writing these tarot stories?
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Old 04-10-11   #12
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Default Sorrow

One dark rainy night, a young man name Yaoi was in the room alone, crying in the bed in sorrow.

What he got on his hand is a Rider-Waite 3 of swords card. The card described as three-stainless steel swords have pierced a red heart, the background of this card is in a cloudy, dark, and rain-filled sky.

What he remembers in his painful memories that happens yesterday, it's was started a regular day, he was mediating the same room relaxing until he received a phone call from his cellphone at the table.

He picks up the cellphone and answers: "Hello."

"Yaoi, this is Matt, Kevin is at the hospital. He was in a car accident." said Matt on the other line.

Kevin is Yaoi boyfriend who he loves dearly. Yaoi rushed in the hospital and frantically looking for Kevin.

"KEVIN! WHERE ARE YOU?!" Yaoi shouted.

The doctor halts Yaoi. "Sir I'm Kevin doctor, I have terrible news to tell you."

"What is it?!" Yaoi asked.

"Kevin didn't make it. He's dead." said the doctor.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" As Kevin cry very severely to hear the terrible loss of his lover.

Back in his room, Kevin was still crying about the death of his lover Kevin. His tears was pouring with sorrow dripping on the 3 of swords card.

THE END

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umm You sure you want to know?
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Old 04-10-11   #14
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umm You sure you want to know?
Tell me? I want to know.
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Old 04-11-11   #15
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Question A fetish story?

What do you think about a fetish story?
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Old 04-11-11   #16
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Bartman, please do not troll.

You've made 3-4 different threads in the last hour or so, and the common theme behind all of them, is their potential to be offensive or cause controversy.

I am also going to request that the staff of the forum do not immediately remove this thread, as a result of my drawing attention to Bartman's trolling attempts. I feel that the time has come for this behaviour to be publically recognised and dealt with.
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A story about articles used in certain religious paractices, most notably voodoo? It might have some potential. I should get on to it, Bart.
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sounds good bartman.
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OK I have to ask. Just what type of Fetish are you speaking of here.

1. Fetish (Fetishism) that is based upon the attribution of supernatural powers or man made objects that have power over others?

2. Zuni Fetishes which are often small carvings of animals or other iconographic items by the Zuni Indians?

3. Hopi Fetishes which are the many carvings or head dresses and such used in the hopi practices?

4. Sexual Fetishism which the name pretty much explains that one.

Please tell me its not the simplistic sexual fetishism or fantasy genre you are refering to. That would simply be so stale and uninspiring as to make it not worth my time or effort to read.
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BMH, anything of adult nature should be posted in the Adult Forum. So, if you mean sexual fetishism then I suggest you go post it there.
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